Tuesday, 28 June 2011

HW due Thursday 30th June

Read the following extract from Coraline which describes the other mother's appearance. Make a post explaining how her appearance makes her seem creepy.

The other mother smiled, showing a full set of teeth, and each of the teeth was a tiny bit too long. The lights in the hallway made her black-button eyes glitter and gleam. ‘You don’t frighten me,’ said Coraline, although they did frighten her, very much. ‘I want my parents back.’
  The world seemed to shimmer a little at the edges. ‘Whatever would I have done with your old parents? If they have left you, Coraline, it must be because they became bored with you, and I will never abandon you. You will always be safe here with me.’ The other mother’s wet-looking black hair drifted around her head, like the tentacles of a creature in the deep ocean.
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25 comments:

  1. bob28 June 2011 at 06:28

    She seems creepy because ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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  2. J28 June 2011 at 07:04

    She seems creepy because

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  3. Zac28 June 2011 at 07:08

    She is creepy because of her eyes

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  4. michaela28 June 2011 at 08:39

    she seems creepy because of her eyes and her teeth are a bit to long the way she was being so mean to Coraline.

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  5. Anonymous28 June 2011 at 13:13

    She had teeth like a vampire, her hair was like a witch, and her eyes were small, dark and glary. They stared straight through you. Zac Castle

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  6. hayley sullivan28 June 2011 at 13:23

    she is creepy because of her eyes and her long teeth

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  7. mitchell29 June 2011 at 23:08

    she seems creepy because of her small dark eyes ,bad teeth and horrible hair also the way in which she spoke to caroloine was nasty .

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  8. jarek30 June 2011 at 00:59

    She is creepy because her black-button eyes

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  9. matty wray30 June 2011 at 01:37

    she is crepy because of her fingers

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  10. andres salas30 June 2011 at 01:51

    she looks creepy because of her personality and because of her apperience

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  11. robert30 June 2011 at 03:10

    The other mother smiled, showing a full set of teeth, and each of the teeth was a tiny bit too long. The lights in the hallway made her black-button eyes glitter and gleam

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  12. michaela30 June 2011 at 03:12

    she is creepy because of fingers and her black button eyes and the way she talk to carlione is so mean

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  13. kier30 June 2011 at 03:13

    she seems creepy because her big black button eyes and her long finger nails and her expreshion

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  14. michaela30 June 2011 at 03:14

    she is creepy because of her fingers and her black button eyes and the way she talk to carline is mean

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  15. louie30 June 2011 at 03:15

    she has big black button eyes that shine in the light and her black hair glimmeing in the light and her long sharp teeth shineing whene she opens her lips to speak to coraline the other mothers button eyes reflected coralines face in them they where so clean and shinney and her tall legs rose from the ground coraline hat to look right up to see her and her long fingure nails whight as can be and her hair was so shinney and it flew a cross her face.

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  16. jack30 June 2011 at 03:19

    she is creepy because she is a spider with button eye's

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  17. Mrs Richards30 June 2011 at 04:42

    Excellent work, Louie!! 5 vivos!

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  18. hayley sullivan30 June 2011 at 05:51

    her button eyes are creepy and her long finger nails are white as the snow on on christmas day

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  19. zac castle30 June 2011 at 05:56

    i think that she is creepy because her skin is as white as paper,she has long finger nails,she has butten eyes and she is a spider

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  20. zac castle30 June 2011 at 06:00

    she is creepy because her skin is as white as paper,her fingers are long with red pantedfinger nails ,she has butten eyes and she is a spider

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  21. zac castle30 June 2011 at 06:01

    she is creepy because her skin is as white as paper,her fingers are long with red pantedfinger nails ,she has butten eyes and she is a spider

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  22. nicole30 June 2011 at 13:38

    she seems creepy because of her black buttons and shes very tall and rather long teeth and she spoke to coraline nasty

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  23. jon-luc5 July 2011 at 05:33

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  24. jon-luc5 July 2011 at 05:50

    Ithink other mother is creepy because she has long finger nails buton eyes and skin like white paper and she is to nice because she asks coraline if she wants more food.she is a spider and she kidnappes people like coralines mother and farther and she has tenticle like hair and she loves to play games in the rain but there is a catch like when coraline plays one of her if she loses she puts butons in her eyes so if I had a other mother Iwould go back and close the door behinde me and nefer go back.

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  25. jon-luc5 July 2011 at 06:04

    Ithink other mother is cxreepy because she has skin like paper she kidnappes people like coralines mother and farther she loves play game but her games have caches like when she soes butons in coralines eyes she has long finger nails tenticle like hair and she is to nice because she asked coraline if she wants more chiken and she has a creepy voice when she is a spider and she has longer teeth and shes toler than the real mother

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